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Um...

Nice picture, really...

...But this isn't a picture portal, it's a flash portal. Maybe try making a forum post offering it?

Jacinto1990 responds:

Yeah, um...who looks at the forum? (besides you)

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This is one of my favorite series on Newgrounds. I'd really like to see it continue in production, and hopefully someday have it's own "Series" or "Collection" category. High quality humor and audio. The graphics aren't cutting edge, but that's part of the charm I think.

The-Swain responds:

There's only so much one man can do, amiright :D

It was alright...

It was okay... could use some serious improvements though.

- You tried to use way too few frames on too high a speed. It made the action choppy and hard to follow.
- Similar to the last, the text was almost impossible to read before it went offscreen - the fast frame rate + low number of frames again.
- I think you may want to look for a different way to convey text than the strips up top - they look a bit amatuerish. Some people go for that look intentionally, that's fine, but be aware that it dosn't look the best - speech bubbles are nice if done tactfully. Voice actors are always best though, if at all necessary.

Sometimes a sweat drop or a wordless pointing hand can convey more than you'd think. :)

Smidly responds:

Yay a review, thanks for it and the advice.

I tried using the sort of expression dealies but I got stuck on how to convery some things. And I didnt use voices for 2 reasons, Ludwig didnt want me to do a crappy job of his voice, and Madness usually doesnt use voices

Heh

Pretty funny - really annoying background music though.

Crayolian responds:

:'( i love the background....

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